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Friday, 25 April 2014

Rewrite the ending of the story (Holiday reading challenge): Andre


If you could rewrite the ending of the story what would happen?  Write a paragraph explaining what you think should have happened

 Title: Planet of Bones.
Author: Sally Odgers
Type of book: Graphic, cartoon book,
Why Your ending is better: Because the ending of the story need to be a happily ending. When its a happily ending it makes the reader happy.

The Original ending: It was kind of a sad ending because ARK3 need to leave their friends after fighting with the monsters.

 What I think should happen: To make a happy ending. Not to make ARK3 leave his friend. Sometimes come and see ARK3

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  1. Ms. Kirkpatrick27 April 2014 at 21:22

    I much prefer happy endings myself. I like that you rewrote it so that the friends still saw each other.

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  2. Anonymous7 May 2014 at 10:44

    Hey Andre, I think that its cool that you turned a sad ending into a happy one so all the friends could stay together maybe for their next adventure they all could go fight more monsters together and be a team? What do you think would happen next?

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