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Monday 14 July 2014

Holiday reading challenge

Title - Speed Machine
Author - Johnny Zucker
Activity - Rewrite the ending
Why my ending is better?

The original ending makes me very angry because Tony nearly killed Danny in a race which is very dangerous. Tony did not say sorry after the race.

I want the ending to be happily. Tony should say sorry for what he had done to Danny.

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4 comments:

  1. Ms. Kirkpatrick15 July 2014 at 10:49

    I think your reasons for changing the ending are very valid. Admitting your mistakes is a good thing! Apart from the ending did you enjoy this book?

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    1. Unknown16 July 2014 at 18:16

      Hello Ms. Kirkpatrick,
      Thank you for commenting on my blog.
      I've enjoyed this book so much, it is really fun to read.

      Andre

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  2. Isabella15 July 2014 at 17:52

    Hi Andre

    I thought that your ending was better because the original sounds very sad. I hope you liked the book though.

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  3. Asmah16 July 2014 at 18:56

    Hi Andre

    I also think your reasons for rewriting the ending are really good. The original ending sounds really sad, so your reasons are quite convincing. Keep it up and have a fun holiday.

    Asmah

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